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So I'm trying to do music by myself ^.^

I watched a lot of tutorials and I also got some tipps by FireOfFriendship ( http://www.youtube.com/user/FireOfFriendship) but I'm still at the begining. This is my first song and it should be something like House, but I'm not sure what it really is xD

Anyway, I would really appreciate some feedback, cause it is the only way to improve myself.

And just some words about my PMVs: I Just needed a longer break, cause I'm stuck with all my PMVs and I really want to do something else too, so I decided to try something new.

Downloadlink: http://www.mediafire.com/?lm92n2o8q1kqe1n

Vector by Stabzor: http://fav.me/d57gmxw

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