Hopefully I can set someone on the right path to creating a good story as well as answer some questions I've gotten a few times. Sections: 0:33 - Introduction 1:45 - Characterization 6:20 - Character Development 10:30 - Style 13:42 - Format 15:25 - Conclusion References: Brony Debates - (Alicorn) Original Characters: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N790fpnkCs4 Digibrony - Observations on MLP Characterization: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tqKm0HdCLR8 Bronycurious - Response to DigiBrony's Thoughts on Characterization: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3-2fDJee7ME PaleoSteno - Relatability in Friendship Is Magic's Characters: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vplo-Q1XacE 38 Common Spelling and Grammatical Errors: http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=hRMRCeQBAKI#! Dialogue Examples: (Bad) "Hello. It's good to see you!" said Billy with a wave. "Hello," said Mandy. (Bad) "Hello," said Billy with a wave. "It's good to see you!" "Hello," said Mandy. (Good) "Hello," said Billy with a wave. "It's good to see you!" "Hello," said Mandy. Suggested Reading: Hoopy Mcgee - "Why Am I Pinkie Pie?" http://www.fimfiction.net/story/34702/why-am-i-pinkie-pie Dennis The Menace - "The Girl With The Lyre Tattoo" http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42550/the-girl-with-the-lyre-tattoo Seether00 - "Liberate The Sun" http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50680/liberate-the-sun Making videos like this makes me wonder if simply understanding these things makes a good writer. It also makes me wonder if these words coming from someone who's not a good writer would mean anything. It's questions like this that keep me up at night. Make Suggestions: Ponies News Brony Topics General News/Current Events Episode Reviews Fanfiction Reviews Product Reviews Contact: E-Mail: bronydebates@yahoo.com Twitter: https://twitter.com/BronyDebates Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Brony-Debates/178568472287060 Opening Song: "Mega Rainbow Overdrive" by Kenneth http://www.youtube.com/user/ARRGHcheese