Originally, I was going to do Cupcakes. But then I actually started reading it, and I realized that nobody really wants to listen to me explicitly describing how a creature is mutilated. But in keeping with the theme of Rainbow Dash, I decided upon another very popular fanfiction, and this is the product of that decision. Let me say it right now: if there is any voice in MLP that I cannot even come close to recreating properly, it is Rainbow Dash.

Seriously, aside from the obvious gender difference, when I try to put that extra 'rasp' in RD's voice, I end up with a raspy and certainly non-feminine voice. It's up there with me trying to scream as Fluttershy, which I also got to do in this video. Yeah. That's never going to work out properly.

Now with all that being said, I think I did better in breaking away from the monotonous narrative, though I know my voice best, so I can pick up the subtle variances in my tone. It may still sound monotonous, it may not, all I know is that at this point, the narrative doesn't get much better.

I tried to do a better job of eliminating noises, and I think I managed to reduce errant puffs of air, though the mouth noises didn't go over nearly as well. I'm glad I listened to the whole thing since there were a few parts where the screw ups didn't get deleted for some reason, and it would have sounded absolutely ridiculous if they were still in the video.

Blah, blah, blah, I like ranting. I hope everyone can enjoy this video. If you have any feedback, whether it be positive or negative, I would like to get some comments. Try to let me know about some areas to improve upon, or tell me what you think I did well. Every little critique helps. Cheers!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NwdIJMALxxi6egHz832IuNIHy1J7JAqulJFoGeLM5tY/edit?hl=en_US (Warning: I'm not sure if this is just my computer, or perhaps my browser, but I currently have an issue wile reading this where the script is acting really slowly and kind of freezes everything if I don't stop it. Just figured I would add this in case your browser suddenly slows down a lot.)