Does this count as my third symphonic metal epic?

So I thought I'd give this old heap of metal some polishing,and you know what, for once I truly feel I've achieved something I was aiming to do since I've started making music. A piece of music that tells a story. It's still not perfect, but for now, I'm more than happy with it.

STORY:
Luna is relaxing in the bask of her most perfect night. However, she discovers a nightmare lurking in a filly's dream, when she decides to fly through a thousand dreams to the filly's. She enters the realm of her dream, faces the nightmare, comforts the filly, and takes her on a flight through dreams. She later lets the filly sleep peacefully, returning to her duty as the protector of the night.

Download here:

Mediafire download here: http://www.mediafire.com/download/j1648d1iviq4cdj/Journey+Through+A+Dream+Remake.mp3

Artwork Here: http://www.deviantart.com/art/luna-night-266750160