“Hello everypony, Snogwritts here!”
“I recently just finished reading, “I Sweetie” By Crystal Moose, and I do have
a lot of thoughts about this fic.”
“So, without further a do, let’s get right to it.”
“Okay so let’s start with the main character of this fic, Sweetiebot!
The robotic filly.”
“The fic starts off with Twilight settling some business with her new assistant, Sweetiebot.
Twilight was showing concerns for the poor robot, and it seems that she need to reveal
some secrets.”
“I actually bought a Sweetiebot myself.
Hey, don’t look at me like that, I was lonely...
Unfortunately, things operate well.”
“(Humming)”
“Oh, hello there Sweetiebelle- Uh, I mean Sweetiebot, sorry, must of mistaken you for
the real Sweetiebelle.”
“Oh, thats right!”
“I have the gears for you right-
“Here!”
“AH!”
“I’VE BEEN REPLACED, OBLITERATE OWNER.”
“Am I dead yet?...”
“Oh?”
“Mom, you…
You saved me…”
“Get it?
Cause I said, “operate?”
Heheeheheh, NO!”
“Sigh*”
“Anyways, I have to say, this fic shows a pretty clever conflict.
It really shows Twilight's caring trait that she has towards Sweetiebot and reveals some
of her character, so, regards to the author for that.”
“When it comes to genres like this, creativity is essential.
The comedy here in this fic isn’t well written.
I wish the author would be a little more creative towards the comedy in this fic, it just seems
to be just written up there without anything leading up from the joke to the punchline.
Influencing comedy in writing requires a lot of anticipations whether it flows with the
story or not.
I suggest the author to overlook on how to embed the comedy in his or her writing.”
“The ending has a bland point.
Specifically, I’m talking about Celestia's time travel.
It didn’t feel it was really that relevant to write in the story, just a detail that
doesn't contribute at all.”
“The author has pretty good approach towards the storyline of this fic, it flows naturally
through the story and kept me interested throughout.
Just that, the ending was weak.”
“Overall, this fic was pretty good, but, I suggest the author to make some edits.”
“So, I’m going to give this fanfic, 3 quills out of 5.”
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