“Hello everypony, Snogwritts here!”
“I recently finished reading, “Celestia’s latest death,” by Lise Enclair and I do
have a lot of thoughts about this fic.”
“So, without further a do, let’s get right to it.”
“Okay so let’s start with the main character, Twilight Sparkle, hey it’s my mentor!
The fic starts off with Twilight receiving a letter from Princess Luna.
She had shared the drastic news that Celestia has died, and it seems that alicorns have
a very..
Uh… special way of dying.”
“Let’s start by saying this story was very well paced.
Not too fast and not too slow, this certainly helps engage me as a reader so regards to
the author for that.”
“This is minor, but I wished Luna's feelings would be expressed a bit further, this would
help me relate to the character a bit more.
She may be a side character, but she plays a crucial role in the story.
Implementing some more figurative language can help.”
“In fact, this leads to my next point, Luna may be not the emotional type of character,
but she needs to act more realistic to the situation.
Again, leading back to point I mentioned earlier.”
“Please keep in mind that even though the main character is the star of the story, side
characters need to have to depth too.
Not as much as the main character, yes, but at least some depth that makes them enjoyable
to read.”
“Overall, the story was great!
It has done many things right and I certainly enjoyed reading it, but it hasn’t reached
it’s full potential yet.
I suggest the author to work his side characters a bit more, especially canon characters.”
“So, I’m going to give this fic, three quills out of five.”
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Alright, that’s it for me, this is Snogwritts, signing out.”