“Hello everypony, Snogwritts here!”
“I recently just finished reading, “A break in Applebucking season,” By RenaissanceBrony,
and I do have a lot of thoughts about this fic.”
“So, without further a do, let’s get right to it.”
“Okay, so let’s start with the main character, Applejack, the hardworking farm pony.”
“The fic starts off with Applejack waking her siblings up.
Today was the last day of Applebucking season, and it seems that her siblings aren’t in
the mood to work.”
“That reminds me, I’m gonna show that mare a piece of my mind.”
“What’s the meaning of this!?
My mother explicitly asked for a chicken, not a filly!”
“Just because you got jealous that Scootaloo won the race does not mean that you can just
trap her in a box!”
“What do you have to say for yourself Applejack?”
“What are you smiling about?!”
“Eventually I found out it was just a prank, it was just a costume.”
“Sigh*”
“I still want my chicken though…”
“Anyways, I have to say, this fic shows a pretty good job showing how the main character
changes.
This is a crucial thing to a particular genre like this is showing how the character changes
throughout the story and the author nailed it.
So, regards to the author for that.”
‘The interactions with the characters make the story intriguing, each one has a different
trait.”
“Although, what I think could’ve been better is to have a little more depth into
the characters themselves.
I know this a slice of life fic, but it could be better if the read can connect with the
characters some more, they just seem splattered on there sometimes.”
“There's a bit of a bland moment in the story.
Spoiler alert, the board game.
It didn’t pique my interest while I was reading it.
It was usually just a segment to continue the story and not so much on the relationships.”
“Overall, this story was pretty good, but it can use some adjustments.”
“So, I’m going to give this fanfic, three quills out of five.”
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Alright, that’s it for me, this is Snogwritts, signing out.”
Thanks for watching!